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January 24, 2005 - 06:51 PM
Desiree says this about Tea With The Black Dragon
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I love the story and read it quite a while ago, but this is less of a review then a question. I was wondering if the Dreamless Sleep potion that is mentioned in "Tea with the Black Dragon" is actually a potion in the Harry Potter universe or if it is one you made up for the story. If it is one you made up, then I was wondering if I could use a potion similar to the Dreamless Sleep in a fan fiction I am currently working on. E-mail me, thanks.
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January 21, 2005 - 12:47 PM
Fayth says this about The Real Answer
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I found this fascinating. I must have read every MLC story and it always struck me that I would rather denounce the Wizarding world than agree to such terms and it always bothered me that everyone's Hermione never even considered it as an alternative. Thank you for actually thinking the circumstances through and making the right choice.
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January 19, 2005 - 06:47 PM
bansidh says this about Ten Minutes Left
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Awesome. Yep, I followed this over from the wiktt list and you are right. This is a far more accurate firsttime! than any I've ever read in fanfic. It actually reminds me of....well, never mind that! Given the circumstances, I might have done the same thing as Trelawney.
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January 07, 2005 - 12:46 AM
Brenden says this about The Real Answer
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Oh my, I am so glad to have read this! After every MLC I read I am always frustrated. They make me seethe as for all I have ever identified with Hermione I would not take it. I would go in a dramatic display fitting the occasion of a useless life. Thank you for this take. Really, I thought Harry and Ron were wonderful and the Headmaster, delightful. Hermione was tragicaly in character. I'm gushing and happy which in dealing with character death probably points to a psychiatrist's chair but yes that is indeed the real answer.
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January 06, 2005 - 04:35 PM
Mrs Lucas says this about Objects of Desire
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I found this story a while ago and I am in agony to read its ending. Do you know when the author will update?
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December 29, 2004 - 11:06 AM
Malina says this about I, Snape
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This is a really wonderful amusing story with incredible ideas. I love it. Greatly funny, as well dramatic and touching and also ... ehm ... very stimulating. :D And this short invidious epilogue is great. Thanks for entertaining me that much! :))
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December 22, 2004 - 01:15 PM
Ishtar (ishtar79 from lj) says this about Queer Eye for the Snape Guy
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I finally got around to reading, and I have to say, I loved it! I've watched a couple of Queer Eye eps, and I have to say you've captured the tone of the show really well.
The Snape/Fab Five interaction was priceless, particulary every single one of Carson's lines. And I nearly died when Snape said Ted would make a good Slytherin.
It is very silly, certainly, but the fun kind of silliness, and a good antidote to all the angst I've been reading lately.
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December 22, 2004 - 11:58 AM
Corazon says this about Transitions
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I apologize for taking so much time between finishing this story and reviewing. I am just going over all the stories I have booked marked and realized that I did not review the final chapter. Sorry!
As you know I am a huge HG/SS fan - die hard fan, so every story I read HG and SS must end up together or else I feel disappointment and depressed but in your story, Transisitons, it was so appropriate the way you ended it. Your character development for each was strong and you decision in the end that they did not fall head over heels in love was the perfect ending for this story! Super, super job!!!
Hugs,
Corazon
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December 19, 2004 - 06:23 AM
Sev says this about I, Snape
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Love it love it love it!!!!!
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December 14, 2004 - 04:50 PM
Carolyn says this about A Night to Remember
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I love this story. I can't wait for it to be finished.
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December 01, 2004 - 09:20 PM
Taran says this about Tea With The Black Dragon
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wow this story is absolutely amazing i laughed i cried its sooooo good and i think white raven is like the best fanfic writer ever i would really like to know if she has written any other fics because i would really like to read them. i absolutely love the fact that snape's character is just like the canon one. i cannot stand fluffy stories, and i also love OC Grace Draven i love her personality the way you describe her sence of judgement EVERYTHING!!! plz send me an e-mail
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November 20, 2004 - 08:36 AM
paige says this about Objects of Desire
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I'm really enjoying this story. I started reading it a couple of days ago, and am yearning for an update. It made me cry! I can't wait for the next chapter. Hope you update soon!
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November 17, 2004 - 09:04 AM
Steph says this about A Tragic Circle
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Looks like Geoffrey is showing some sneaky Slytherin roots despite his Hufflepuff sorting. ;-)
This chapter was a wonderful addition to my gloomy day. Thank you. I look forward to the next update!
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November 14, 2004 - 11:01 PM
Shags says this about No Means No
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This comment is for the previous reviewer, regarding the 'humor' of Lana Macknir's story.
Just because the author calls something a comedy does not make it funny. If someone wrote a story about killing babies and called it a comedy because they think killing babies is funny, you'd likely think that author was a bit sick. This is a very similar reaction that many people feel at the idea of someone being forced to have a child that they don't want. They see it as an invasion of that person's freedom, and an abominable thing to curse a child to be unwanted.
It's just not funny. It's disgusting. The fact that Lana finds that funny says something about her and her sense of right and wrong. When an author writes, they expose their own views on things. If they can't take criticism for what they say, they have the wrong hobby.
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November 14, 2004 - 04:25 AM
siryanne says this about No Means No
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What can I say? I read the original story and I found it great, because I've got few humor, which seems not to be your case...
Yeah, your version is not so bad, but the thing I don't like is that you have judge Lana Manckir's "horrifying conclusion". It was just à fiction! She doesn't think that in real life! Nobody thinks that we can force someone to have a baby!
She just wrote a STORY, and the end was had humoristic effect, that's all!
Well, that is xhat I had to say
Excuse me if you don't understand everything, english is not my native language
bye
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November 13, 2004 - 06:52 PM
Emily says this about A Night to Remember
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i am really enjoying this so far
it will get me in trouble because i've been reading this story instead of doing assignments
anyway can't wait for the next chapter
Emily
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October 20, 2004 - 01:47 PM
Susan says this about Transitions
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Fantastic! Very well-thought-out dialogue and character development. Lovely erotic scenes.
Thanks for an enjoyable afternoon-
Susan
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October 11, 2004 - 05:37 AM
shoshana says this about I, Snape
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Hi April Grey,
this is just to tell you how deeply I enjoyed reading 'I, Snape'. This story is so weird and funny and touching at the same time and so very well written. It is my favourite right now.
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September 17, 2004 - 06:26 PM
Snapefan says this about A Tragic Circle
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oooh! I'm so glad you updated this story. It's great. Keep going please!
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September 10, 2004 - 06:00 PM
snapefan says this about Objects of Desire
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Thank you so much for updating the story. I find it addictive now!
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